tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.comments2011-12-06T16:42:19.396-08:00Burick Grahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16206928901286711907noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-68599634018322906532011-12-06T16:42:19.396-08:002011-12-06T16:42:19.396-08:00WowAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-8756500995873097412009-10-19T20:56:21.195-07:002009-10-19T20:56:21.195-07:00not bad not bad at all and yea it is a lil to much rhyminThtgurlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08626218409999194984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-65608386023869133832009-10-19T12:05:02.659-07:002009-10-19T12:05:02.659-07:00Its nice. But it would be interesting if you can make more metaphors and stir away from rhyming. Can you express sweet thoughts and express them in ways that we didn't know could make sense? I hope this is good constructive criticism.MFritzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00505605962766887554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-49038849732511147332009-10-19T08:11:27.965-07:002009-10-19T08:11:27.965-07:00awww thats so cute u so talented pa u need to make a book ill buy it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-88334174938296915252009-08-25T06:47:10.111-07:002009-08-25T06:47:10.111-07:00THATS WUZ UP I LOVE IT IM GLAD I GAVE U THAT TITLE LOLAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-44977549966708498942009-08-24T19:19:47.441-07:002009-08-24T19:19:47.441-07:00aww thats so sweet booge i love it u write really good keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-68889031489341128742008-08-07T23:48:00.000-07:002008-08-07T23:48:00.000-07:00ok mr. poet...nicely done.KUMIKOnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-23342471088398541662008-08-05T18:32:00.000-07:002008-08-05T18:32:00.000-07:00Man that was intense! I hope somebody calls me by accident like that!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-91075676703772149252008-08-05T18:30:00.000-07:002008-08-05T18:30:00.000-07:00I love this one Burick! It's so honest and pure. It actually makes me lonlier b/c I want to be the one you wrote about!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-62603318430709211352008-07-22T15:00:00.000-07:002008-07-22T15:00:00.000-07:00wowAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-12050937089756433832008-07-22T14:52:00.000-07:002008-07-22T14:52:00.000-07:00saw someone mention your work on youtube so i had to check it out. i felt every wordbrady j.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-71471701450255848382008-07-22T14:50:00.000-07:002008-07-22T14:50:00.000-07:005 stars keep up the good workcindynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-59339545353180242882008-07-22T14:48:00.000-07:002008-07-22T14:48:00.000-07:00you are so talented. wish you were with me. hope you make it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-92095422984476390412008-06-25T07:39:00.000-07:002008-06-25T07:39:00.000-07:00You have my water fall warming up as I read this. You should really put your work out and become a writer. You're a Masterpiece!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-518804725870394218.post-6803525812094446552008-06-25T07:26:00.000-07:002008-06-25T07:26:00.000-07:00I love the words you use and the fact that they come from the heart. I know love has its ups and downs, but I hope one day you find the right other half of you. She's out there somewhere. God will lead you to each other.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com