It's impossible to compare anything to the love we make,
Impossible to explain how much I yearn and just can't wait.
From the feel of your bottom lip as it's trapped in my own,
To the sounds that you make when ever you moan.
There's no way to describe the touch of your skin,
Or to tell you how it feels when my nature is within.
No way to show you how I feel when I see your face,
Or explain why I'm always longing for your warm embrace.
the only thing I can say is your all I dream and think of,
And I hope you keep blessing me with that super duper love
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14 years ago
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3 comments:
awww thats so cute u so talented pa u need to make a book ill buy it :)
Its nice. But it would be interesting if you can make more metaphors and stir away from rhyming. Can you express sweet thoughts and express them in ways that we didn't know could make sense? I hope this is good constructive criticism.
not bad not bad at all and yea it is a lil to much rhymin
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